Surrender to sight and sound,
spot the light,
even while bound,
upon the ground.
A wall within the inbetween,
find the courage to grace the scene,
burn a tower,
scorch the sky,
a timely scowl to terrify.
Stress the stressor,
unlearn the over-confident,
dark professor.
Lift the ocean from the floor,
shake the world a little more,
from first to last,
gently,
substantially,
unlive your past.
First Impression?
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powerful images
excellent write
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A very interesting poem. The use of imagery and harnessing of the senses works well for this poem. The imagery used allows a vivd picture to be painted. The image and way you've described it are pretty snazzy. A very good poem.
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