Ascend against this pitter patter,
senseless twirling,
become the mad hatter,
incessant social madness,
utter gently of your sadness,
too quick to judge,
and quicker to glare,
a genuine heart,
is red and rare.
why are you running away,
let catatonic word play,
slip into another shadow of disarray,
keep your idiocy at bay,
bite your lip,
lessen your grip,
save your wasted,
witless quip.
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Awesome write. The pace was quick and the subject you approached was done with style. The flow was very smooth.
An awesome way of portraying the subject matter. Awesome poem =D
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