Passion
Running through my veins.
Lust,
Craving for your body.
I think about
I dream about
All the times we shared.
These thoughts and dreams
Cause me to crave more.
These cravings,
They hurt,
My needs cry to be fulfilled.
But yet I'm denied,
Deprived.
Is that the way it should go?
Fiery passion
To sudden end?
My body still burning,
Craving you beside me.
Am I to be always, forever
Denied?
Author notes
Before anyone who knows me asks- Jesse and me are fine, it's just a poem.
I want to know where this poem can be improved
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passionate..
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wow this was a very good poem. so full of thought provoking imagery. now about a title..... how about fiery passion burning through my veins.....or lustfull dreams......verry good job on this poem. good luck on your quest to finding a title and i look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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lustful dreams sounds good, I'll give that some consideration. Thank you so much for the comment and title suggestions.
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