She stands on the edge of tomorrow,
time drowning at her feet.
Her mind struggles to remember,
but confusion is all she sees.
She watches in awe as the river
cascades off the rim of the world.
Surely it wasn't always like this--
or was it? She isn't sure.
She's tired of running and fighting,
weary of scheming and devising.
She bows her head and chooses,
to surrender to the Moon.
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest.... by Sweet Impatience.
1800 points, ended October 19, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love this, wow I love where you took the prompt. the emotions that one feels while reading this are intense, ok they were for me anyway. Fantastic poem, the imagery is vivid in many ways including emotional.
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest
Good luck
Kat
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Thanks Sweet Impatience, it was a fun contest to do.
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ah I see somebody has returned to writing poetry again! I'm glad it is good to see that. Love this poem by the way.
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Hey it's good to see you back on the site. I'm glad you like the poem,
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