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Sprinkles

 

 

 

 

 

 Hardened clay firmly chorded silence.

Above the turmoil, a prayer
of thankful habitats and odysseys
crawled continually through

 blings of freedom.

Each ding and dent, prudent
to her mindscape's wail ..

If only this Man, this Father, would smile
one last time upon her achievements
would all be forgiven,

her body cleansed by sprinkles of light.

Author notes

Inspiration: #1 - 11 lines of more than 2 words per line. Just for you sis ..


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This will be open for TWO WEEKS. I will be back and judge this when the contest closes.



Minum of 8 lines, Max of 12.... [and no 2 words on each line, I will not tolerate it..]



Time Limit: TWO WEEKS



I want you to use poetic devices, Don't describe the images to me.. I want to you to give me your best. I know that you can do it..



You will have several prompts to choose from. Please for my sanity or what's left of it, place the option number in your AN...

If you reserve, guess what??? I expect you to return, if you don't not... well then I'll just DQ you without a second thought.. So how about we play nice and not irritate the judge

RULES:

NO StIcKy CaPs
NO Chat Speak
NO Dirty Pretty
NO Bashing other Poets or their work



ALL OF THE PROMPTS CAME FROM PHOTOBUCKET

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    October 9

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    this is what I needed today, ok actually tonight. days have been rough, overwhelming and tearing me down. I'm weak, but I find hope and strength in my higher power.. I love the background, I knew right away it was you. the poem touched me deeply and it means a lot to me on many levels and many different ways for many reasons. moving forward isn't always easy and there is a lot of potholes in the road. and lately I've felt alone, just not used to this world .. I've been gone for a long time . thank you so much for everything.


    Rock-Ette


  • Jesann gold member
    September 29

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    Wonderful take on the prompt.
    Beautifully done.
    A great read, very well done.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 25

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    Beautifully done! I think you have captured the picture brilliantly! Ahhh to be cleansed in such a way.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 21

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    words strongly penned here sir!
    very vivid imagery!!
    written beautfully

    love and blessings

    Rend

  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 20
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    sprinkles???? I had some of those on my ice cream cone today.. well not on the cone but on the ice cream where were you, I would have shared good night, going to bed now.. really I am.. just ask Jin she'll tell you.. LOL btw in case... I get blamed for anything, I didn't do it.. Jin did


    • JinSays gold member
      September 20
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      what did Jin do? pray, please tell?
      hmmmmm???


      • Solo Wisp gold member
        September 20
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        I see troublemakers run in the family ...

        Ohh .. that's right ... I'm the instigator.

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