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Dust in the Rain.


You brought me to pointless crying.
My tears run drier than the stream bed where I used
to bathe on a hot summer day.
My words are dust in the rain. Wash my tears
off with the ghosts from the wayside memories I pushed away.
You've brought me to the point of no return.
The point where heart, hell and healing all mean the same thing.
Break me down. 

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I chose Phantom of the Opera. I hope you enjoy this.

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  • Princess Derge
    September 23, 2009

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    words as dust in the rain is a beautiful image.
    last line is strong. i like this alot!!

    nice write :]