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Pistol King



  A Foreigner
  in his own
  land

  Pistol King;
  Moth eaten
    Digital clouds
 
    Like sunlight
    afraid to
    show itself;
  For fear
  of persecution
  for his
  demeanor.

      As if it
  were a crime
    to smile
  in grey lands;
  in grey times.
 
      two
  by three.
    cords blank.
    his brown coat
    was the first and last
    color they'd ever seen.
 

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  • lesbian-in-love
    October 4

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    This was really nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. Painted a good picture for me with your words. Keep up the good work. Never stop writing.!


  • raw love
    September 20

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    I was just thinking about how I wanted to read something from you. This is written very nicely and I like the pictures that you've painted with your words. It does make me curious what it is that has come from you that has inspired these lines.