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Blissful ride

You have me so hardly, passionately…
Your spirit rises behind, hypnotizes me…
I feel touches of your soft hand palms,
Embrace of your muscled shoulders…
Imagine your hair tickle my back…
You take me with you to the Fantasia land.
Everything possible there…It seems so real…
Your kisses…hot breath…athletic chest…
Erection raises your trunk over my moisture bud.
Flight of your dreamy spirit crazes me
As I ride it, feel it, embrace every inch of it.
I pretend you do for me everything I want –
Give me satisfaction of blissful orgasmic delight
By imaginary touching of my inner flaming desire.
I have you in my mind so hardly, passionately…



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  • spirit rising
    November 17
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    very passionate, something you do so well.


  • zee91190
    November 4

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    A well written poem that so many can relate to. The flow and imagery of the poem is very good. Thank you for entering my contest

    All the best


  • Titus gold member
    October 11
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    this exquisitely pleasant sensual hits every note firmly on the button, lovely


  • annother gold member
    October 10
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    Very passionate piece you have penned, great job. Thanks so much for the entry, best of luck.


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 5

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    This is very passionate, blissful...yes i agree... wonderful espression here...this is very well done...PK


  • SteveS gold member
    October 5

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    Oooh, pretty smoky! This poem is good for the rising 'spirit'


  • MichaelLeeSmyth
    September 24

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    Whilst I cannot remember my last flight into fantasia, this is a pretty good view of one, very well done.
    Peace


  • prain82
    September 24
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    .... hmm

    talk about a fantasy.. nicely written.


  • John BoSox
    September 23

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    I have my laptop in the shower with me.You made me cool off..Your fault is it shots out..I will bill you for it.your fault..LOl../Great job on this..very sensual, indeed..I enjoyed it

    John


  • Jasmine Minx
    September 21

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    wow this is a very beautiful poem. i hope you do well in the contest.

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