it started early,
when the darkness set in
emotionless now
and i just don't care.
life was ripped away
these hands feel empty,
and no longer do i embrace.
life shit on me
like a tornado,
my world was shattered
and gray.
fuck
i guess i'm blind,
reality sets in
and my mind spins
i have no control.
clinically depressed
and anxiety disorder
just another statistic,
too far gone to be saved....
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie. by Noir mariposa...x.
700 points, ended September 21, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Personally - I think that this could've been structured a little better for easier reading - but that's just my opinion.
All in all though;
this is a good poem, I like what you did with the prompt
Thank you for entering;
I wish you the best of luck
Claire x
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