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love

if all you need is love,
no wonder its so hard to find,
if all you need is love,
i wonder how ill survive

is this too simple?

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  • Zephyrr
    September 20

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    I love it when "simple" poems like these just grip me. I really enjoyed this, I sometimes wonder about this same subject.In these few lines I felt so much emotion and heart. A beautiful love is out there and it'll find you soon. I think the best love though, is love for oneself.


  • just mercedes gold member
    September 20

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    It's a simple poem, but it raises questions that have never been completely answered. I think love will find you, you don't really need to search!