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Burning Love

My heart is now frozen,
There's ice in my bones.
I long for the touch,
Of the love I'd once known.
My tears are all hollow,
My eyes have turned black.
The space remains empty,
For the one I now lack.
I think of the name,
But dare not to speak.
Or through these old wounds,
My cold blood would leak.
Then suddenly I see,
Someone new in my path.
My angel in the darkness,
Here to save me at last.
You speak beautiful words,
And the pain goes away.
My passion re-ignites,
Sending fire through my veins.
The ice is all melted,
My eyes shine bright blue.
I've found my true love,
I have finally found.....you.....

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  • DenyMyLove
    September 25

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    Wow! I so did not expect the turn in emotions! Very well written! Something that most, if not all, of us can relate to from some point in our lives!!!!
    ~DAWN~


  • Princess Kitten-
    September 20
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    Nice Man.


  • DeathtoloveShade gold member
    September 20

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    Awe this was beautifully done and well written.
    Such lovely abd powerful words. She is very lucky.
    Keep on writing dear Angel

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