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Grief.(Hay(na)ku)

Grief
Deep distress
With no relief

In a list

A contest entry

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 26

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    This is right to the point, there rarely is light in the tunnel once grief has a grip. I like the form, not one I've seen before. Neatly done, good luck in the contest with it


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 25
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    Very true! Sometimes that's exactly what grief seems like... no relief!