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Princess Pride

Innocence is bestowed in the image of this child

Has not the world captured her very soul

Time has sat still whilst she breaths

keep her safe from life's tribulations 

Let her innocence reign on earth

For the beauty of her pure soul

Will exist within this image

Timeless  irreproachable beauty

 

Forever here exists

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

photo by Alf Oliver  
I will try to get it on the poem

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  • Bob Fox
    September 30

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    Hope

    As we seek our self glory at the expense of our children I pray that your fine words ring true somewhere. Well penned dear poet.

  • Lennox28
    September 28
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    I think this poem is absolutely beautiful. x


  • SteveS gold member
    September 24

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    What a gorgeous poem! I find it interesting how the lines contract nearing the end and add to the impact. Really nice.


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    September 20

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    This is almost like a prayer or a pretty little melody. Very creative indeed!. Love the calm within each line. Beautifully written. Thank you so much for joining my contest. Good luck. Can you please credit the photo

    Shaz xx