what sort of darkness,
here,
inside of me.
frailty.
remorse.
insolent recognition.
the spinning,
stop.
wretched trash.
formidable silence.
involuntary smile.
words.
phrasing.
sentence.
one unto another
until the break,
until they flow.
the best there is
to come up with.
only,
something else.
a little more.
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Two Applause
Dear Author,
Allow me to give you a splendid comment from me, Adamastor.
I noticed that your poem seemed a little empty. Is that intentional? If so, then this is a great poem, and would be worth 3 applause. If this wasn't intentional, it would be worth 1 applause, so I shall round it out to a score of two.
Please be advised, that due to the fact that I am fairly new here and have not got many points yet, I cannot afford to give you a score of two, so to compensate I shall say this poem is worth 3 applause, but only physically give it a score of one. ONLY take the comment of 3 as the score.
With Kindest Regards
Adamastor
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