a silver tipped tongue spewing hop-less romantics and endless tragedies maniacs and catastrophes early morning sun rises to show diamond glistening dews on blood red roses call bird sings of love gone wrong sadly singing his call bird song a bullet less gun still smoking an hot caught a spot among the darkness of the sea raging and swirling getting in side that sliver tippd tongue spewing tails of jealousy and greed speed freaks and the weak darkened minds that once were full of light meagerly slip away into the night a man ready pay his dues eats bloody steaks while under the moon light of the new wake testaments of old now showing the truth they hold doesn't bother the bold silver tippd tongues talk of murder and rage loneliness and despair cause that song bird sings his lonely song tonight the devil has won he sits on his thrown with his silver tippd tongue alone in despair caring not of the pain he brings letting us know of the song bird who sings
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Forgot the applause
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The way this poem evolves, and that recurring image of the silver tipped tongue and the song bird who sings, i couldn't stop reading, it just gathered me up and took me along for the ride. The only critiscim is a couple of spelling errors in the middle but otherwise i loved it
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thank you ive never shared my poems with people and since im a guy most my friends arent into poetry so thank you got a myspace?
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nope, no myspace, i've been writing poems for ages but they kinda sucked for ages, i got a good english teacher this year who reads all my poems and critiques them and doesn't freak out, which is always nice
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ya i never realy wrote poetry in high school i thought i suckd but i got over that and most my poems turns out ok so are you realy from australia ive never been out side noth america
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yep, pure australian, with the different spelling of colour and everything
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Have to go now, bye
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