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Where are you? Who are you?

Sometimes I dream
the most vivid
dreams of a woman
but I don't reconize
her.

So I ask, who is she?
I know that there
is a woman out there
for me, but I want
her in my life now.

So I ask the second
question of, where
are you?

If you are a reality 
come into my life
now.

If you're just a fantasy
go away. I'm tired
of being alone.

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  • Angel Wings1960
    September 20

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    I would suggest " If you are reality come into my life now. If just a fantasy go away.
    I am tired of being alone