life's greatest treasure
God's unconditional love
heavenly home smiles
A contest entry
- Treasure Maps by pixiestix.
1300 points, ended September 21, 2009, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!
And if one opens their heart totally for all of the beauty in they will feel contentment beyond their imagination.
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hmm, just wonderful, makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside
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A REAL treasure, Agape love is a true blessing!
Happy
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s and s so few words full of inspiration and hope x x
wonderful Marylyn
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much congrats on your honorable trophy win! it was very much and greatly deserved!
truely unconditional love is "life's greatest treasure" in all the world. the most precious gift that anyone can give is unconditional love. this is such a beautiful short write. short, sweet, and to the point. it has a basic important message that should always be known. i believe it is always important to know that you are loved unconditionally by somebody no matter who they are or who you are. we all have the right to be loved like that. whether it is by our religious beliefs with God and his angels love or from personal persons such as family, close friends, and lovers/significant others.
continue to write on with beautiful and meaningful words.
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Thank you for reminding me that unconditional love is so important. Our unconditional love for our family and friends can mend broken hearts.
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I like this Melodies!
you done a great job. Congrats on your trophy! Have a nice day, Slick99 
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Short and sweet, and an important reminder. Congrats on the honorable mention,. though if I was hosting the contest it very well might have placed higher.
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Interesting....
..... how is it that you have so many trophies and yet only have 2 poems posted here. Are you deleting you poems???? I hope not you should make a book or something. How is it that I can more of your writing?
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Yup. I took all my poems away.
I moved everything to my PC. Two poems is good... I might write another one by the end of the year, though if somebody has a haiku contest I like. lol Thanks for asking.
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you are so right honey for the greatest gift of all was the cross that bared his love.. well penned thank you for sharing you heart hugs Angel♥
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love the modern Ku - says so much in so few, but well chosen, words.
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Although this is a hated haiku, I will overlooked it and say MOST excellent and should have been awarded the Gold, if not the Platinum prize!! I liked it a ton!
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You
wrote a BibleKu! I looked at the category & expected to see Senryu. I just started counting immediately. I think this is just wonderful & so cleverly done. This surely is a treasure map.
This is worthy
of more than HM in my book. Here's a Gold: 
Love the aha. Thought you might go total alliteration: heavenly home His, but His home with us in it certainly brings smiles! 
Heading home...
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nice
Short, sweet, to the point, and heart felt. Nicely done
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great
a simple act turned into a beaufiful poem...I have a few fresh ones on my page....guess you may like to check ...thanks for sharig this one -
A poem which generates smiles, with faith and God and love. In the map of life X marks the spot. I am new here, please visit one of my poems and if you care to, leave some thoughts. Thank you.
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a good piece that spins language into another realm with fine grace and ease, i have just been called a god sucker by someone lol i feel so happy that i want to do a dance.
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Your comment made me laugh out loud. lol
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Melodies, this is a great little poem, spirituality is one aspect of life to treasure, it is a necessary part of being human. Congratulations on the hm.
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Hope and love and magic walk within this short poem, Love John
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Congratulations on the Honourable Mention
This is lovely; it certainly makes me pause to think how nice it would be to have that unconditional love Beautiful hun
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Stay safe
Love to You
~Manda
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Lovely few words that speaks volumes
Very up-lifting and spiritual
Congratulations on the HM
Very well deserved
Much love my friend
David
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TRULY TOUCHING!!!!!!
This indeed is the greatest of all treasures that come our way!
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Conditions imposed on conditions,
such is our way of life. Your reminder
is well taken.
Well done!!!!!
M-C
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Awe...This makes me want to smile and snuggle up and think of stars surrounding heaven.
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Pix is giving you a door prize...she better give me one too!
I'm all for unconditional love, from whatever source I can get it from. God, family, even my crazy cat Herman.
Who votes in the Pirate contests? The host or the group? If it's Pix, We'll bribe her. She likes fig Newtons.
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Life's greatest treasures cannot be measured by earthly means.
This is wonderful message contained in so few words and so nicely done.
Thanks so much for entering the contest. You also qualify for a door prize so please IM me to collect your coins.
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wow
i have never evreseena poem about home siles this is the first one and very uniquely done.short and precsie to point.i loved it thanks for sahring it hun
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