I knew her
she was forever
frozen shaking hands
twin hearts beating
and in that silence
subtle sighs
scream together.
She was never
in the blink of an eye
damp warm hands
only one heart beats
a gentle summers haze
serenity breathes
alone I die.
And in a single stroke
of her gentle of hand
my life was spilled
as we had planned
And she left with a smile
as at last I looked above
was this the purest of sex
or was this unrequented love?
Author notes
Whatever...
A contest entry
- Carpe Diem by annother.
1400 points, ended October 12, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Bravo! Excellent piece, it captured my attention from beginning to end. I would love to see more of your work. Thank you so much for the great entry.
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wow... this was a wonderful poem. Just wonderful! It was emotional and so well written very nice
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This is a very emotional poem. You have captured the pain and feelings of being lost so well here. But, my dear friend know that I am here if you need me.
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Very amazing, emotional, heartfelt and deep piece. Loved the presentation as well. A great read!
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Wow!! What a read this one is! This touches deep my dear brother... Maybe because of the stories that we share, and know so well. You really did amazing with this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nevermore!
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