Be brave
For one could not love in cowardice
It must be shown to every opened eye
It have to be felt above all denies
And as a romantic crime should be confessed
‘Cause it holds a heart imprisoned as love lasts
Be brave
To live a hidden love would never be called living
As two cannot breathe without air
As lovers may not shine under shadows of guilty
Break it free, face the thrill of truth
Or you might kill your love in its very youth
Be brave
Forgiving mistakes and lies is the ultimate proof
Any happiness can survive with sorrows to bear
Any partners will be for life if errors they can't repair
So I say, shall you listen
Courage is the only door to love's Eden
Please tell me what you think. All coments will be returned.
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Really beautiful, a breath of fresh air.
Some really nice lines in here, I've not read poetry like this in a long time.
one thing, line 12, shouldn't it be "your love" not "you love"
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thanks!
sorry, i really mispelled that "your"...
tks for your comment! soon i'll pay you back a visit
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To live a hidden love would never be called living
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Courage is the only door to love's Eden
those lines stopped me short. amazing job. i love the flow, the rhyming scheme, all of it. very beautiful. -
I respect you along with the poem... Great work!
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this is sucha touching poem realy good write
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You are wise lass....
you must be brave and ready for heart break..
Articulate and sophisticated writing.
You speak from a high perch little gypsy,
the angle and presentation were capped with wisdom.
Loved this.
Bless your
heart lass,
Liam.
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Lovely
"It must be shown to every opened eye"
"Forgiving mistakes and lies is the ultimate proof"
Excellent and accurate description of love one of the best I've ever read on this site.
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very well written we all should be alittle brave sometimes.
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awwwwww
i like this its cute and just awesome and yes be brave for love without that braveness what would we have?
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