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hello again life

  September 20, 2009

Hello again Life,
Seems like years since I have actually spoken to you.
Time just passes me by in an endless spiral of conflict, day in and day out, weaving yet another cloak of disappointment. I sat thinking this morning, trying to remember the last time I was truly happy, or even content for that matter. Couldn't come up with one, I guess it has been far too long ago. Why do you keep me here when all I long for is to be set free? I am a burden on this world, incapable of bringing good to it, yet here I sit and slowly rot in my discontent. Why must it be this way? Why can I not just be set free, have I not suffered enough?
Sincerely unsatisfied,
Bret

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  • Angelflower
    September 23

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    You bring good into this world.. And hey, you mean a lot to me. Your words make my heart sad, but just remember, you may feel alone. But I'm not too far behind you pushing you along you are a beautiful person... and one day, you'll remember what it's like to be happy and content.

    Angel


  • KytKitsune
    September 21

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    Oh, wow..... this is incredible. I love the words, and the font of the poem fits perfectly with said words..... so much emotion fit into such a cordial letter. I loves it!
    Keep on Writing the good Write!
    Kyt the Kitsune