With the kiss of an angel
Upon lips.
Passion's sunlight permeates the moment.
A warmth deeply pentrating
Circumvents the center of the soul.
Moments cherished.
A contest entry
- YOUR KISS IS LIKE SUNLIGHT by Swan song.
700 points, ended October 3, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the image of "passion's sunlight permeates" This is a poem with love and warmth and hope. It is also full of gratitude! Nicely done!
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Thank you. I believe this is one of my better short poems. I don't often write short ones. Thanks again. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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it sounds that way A lovely flower of a poem!!!!!!!!
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Thank you. I appreciate it! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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SO SWEET AND LOVELY!!!!!!
Such peaceful bliss as I read this comes to me!
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Kevin,
Thanks so much for taking the time to read this, comment and applaud it. I appreciate it. I am so glad you like it! Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Aw this is very sweet and uplifting.
A write the definitely makes the reader smile.
Goodl uck in the contest =]
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Thanks . I appreciate you reading, commenting and applauding. I had to do some fancy footwork getting all the words and word count correct in this one. Thanks again.
~Donna~
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