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Serena's Joy

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Out of the men stepped her sister; Nay worry in hazel eyes
as she counted each man wounded; weakness she despised
"Sabrina! tis me first matey ordered to save thy ivory hide;
since blood, guts you could n'ver really truly abide."

"Withdraw thou plank; protection tis fathers brother
whom filled him with lead; he raised us like a mother.
Besides thou art weak sister ye chirp of bloody love
sickening Red Beards Jolly Roger flying high above."

Sabrina fought back a thousand bucket's of painful tears
on a storm tossed ocean unconcerned about her fears
Rain turned again to mist; her twin Serena ship burned
Serena stood aboard this deck that her heart yearned

With her belly full of his kicking little babe
Tyrus a bloody mess needing to be saved....

Unholy alliances spawned upon life's portal to man's hell
as the she-devil laughed when her smitten sister fail.
In hopes he would badly suffer;  then surely expire
Sabrina began to pray with piety for her true desire.

"Arise Cap'n Tyrus" a thundering voice on rapid gales
alerted all the crews tis not; wicked or tricky sails.
His bleeding ceased, on two feet he stood tall
weak, pale shocking his tormentor to be gall-ed.

Twas relevant to Sabrina his heart beat tis saved
escaping a briny deep abyss, the crackens grave.
Twill be chronicled this dark night passing slow
integrity tis a vile word me crew doth not know

Into the black winds that blow; me sister unhand her!
"scrub this deck ye scallywags, weight me anchor."

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  • Brazos silver member
    September 24

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    One sister pregnant, the other wanting to be also? Or, am I reading it wrong...oh, what a tangled web we weave! Tyrus lives, but what's to become of the sisters? It would seem that there are supernatural forces at work here.

    You have brilliantly crafted your poem/story here, and your rhyme rings true throughout. This is truly a masterpiece, change nothing, for perfection cannot be improved upon. Perhaps the entire story is a recollection from your old soul...

    Wonderfully woven, I love you,
    Brazos


  • marandah gold member
    September 23

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    This is one to bookmaaarrrk!!

    Haaaarrrrgh!!

    Thank ye, me heaarrrty.

    I shall reference to this often, as I am a mere 'tryna-be-poet'.

    Yet, whilst I may be a newbie to form and meter, I can still understand when something flows well; I loved this.


  • Ravynna
    September 23

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    I love the format of this poem. The tone and rythm onf this was perfect.


  • smitaanand
    September 23

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    The story is very beautiful and equally beautifully portrayed ,I loved your conversational tone , so refreshingly different.Please take care, thanks for sharting...


  • Amera gold member
    September 20

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    I really enjoyed reading this sonnet. Truly, it is beautifully written with a wonderful story. The meter even has an underlying pirate tone to it. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 20

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    wow..

    this is interesting..always liked the pirates tales and this is a great pirate tale
    you have weaved.. nice imagery in this too..

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