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Zen Reading

snuggled, soft covers
diffused light touches pages
my windows opened
wisdom's beams caress this soul
heart smiles a zen smile

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This is a tanka about how good it feels when I'm reading and I feel a sense of mindful awareness.

What do you think,gently speak your mind .

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  • sleepinglion
    September 27
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    Lovely, I know exactly where you are here, so well expressed
    David

  • drifting cloud silver member
    September 20
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    'heart smiles a zen smile' - lovely. This poem gives one a warm, comforting feeling.


    • Stevie.me
      September 20
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      Yep

      Yeah it feels happy and cozy when I'm reading and I feel a since of mindful awareness. Very relaxing