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How to Critique Dark, Depressing Poetry



















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  • janeofdreams silver member
    September 22

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    Inspires "happy"

    Makes me want to go write something happy. First a big colorful flower, now this! How can I resist?


    • wbiro gold member
      September 23

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      well then, a happy poem it is... and it has to come from your core- no happy with depressing underneath...


  • FallingSideways silver member
    September 21

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    what is that new animation movie with food falling from the sky? ....is it a disney movie? ....i probably should know this considering my major... ugh....
    anyways....
    ahhh i found the title. it is called "cloudy with a chance of meatballs".
    mayhaps you should title your picture "cloudy with a chance of cookies" no? yeah, i dont care for the title too much either. or does it look more like a cracker?

    • wbiro gold member
      September 21
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      yes, it does look like a cracker (depending on how hungry one is at the moment...) it's supposed to be a 'cloud' though I saw 'UFO' myself (my head being more in outer space than in the clouds)...

      as for your suggested title, hmmm... maybe "Cloudy With a Chance of Prodding and Poking"...


  • sinfull
    September 20

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    The face of irony!

    I do get the irony in this....and underline the truth part. very creative!


  • still.she.waits
    September 20

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    with a big random smiley face hovering above the dark?

    • wbiro gold member
      September 20
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      YES! (and I would emphasize that 'randomness') it's a visual metaphor sheesh! do I have to explain everything? lol


      • still.she.waits
        September 20
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        YESH you do. [have to explain everything that is]
        I'm short. things tend to go over my head sometimes

        • wbiro gold member
          September 20
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          you're not short, I'm just tall...

          ok, explanation- the dreary scene is the poem/poet, and the smiley face is me/my comment, trying to give the person some perspective... get it? (hoping someone does...! )

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