lips, moistened plump to delicious
glisten wet with kissable wishes
when rain drops
drip from Heaven
clothing, scant and sodden
reveals simple beauty
naked, pure, uninhibited
a Goddess in a time
long forgotten
when rain drops
drip from Heaven
metrical songs
entice lovers
to play along
cloaked by the
rhythmic drumming
when rain drops
drip from Heaven
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When raindrops drip from heaven.....is such a delightful phrase. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem, so enchanting. I like the repeating of that lovely phrase between each stanza and the flow of the poem was easy and dreamy.
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reveller
thank you so very much for your thoughtful comment
your kindness is always welcome here 
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Nice play on rain...
You did well with this precipitation piece.
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tom
thank you so very much for stopping by and for your thoughtful comment.
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Your back
This certainly kicks the door open for you. Welcome back and what a nice way to hell, Hello.
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TC
Thank you and welcome back yourself
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Very sensual. There is something sexy about the rain. Especially when you are caught in it with the one you love. Excellent poem. Such passion and emotions, along with an image that stays within the mind. Well Done.
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Good morning Michael, thanks for stopping by to read and comment, I am glad that you liked this piece and found the sensuality within it. I hope your day is going well. Thank you my friend.
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Sensually penned with a natures touch.
Wonderfully tender indeed. Well done.
All the best and thanks for dropping by and commenting.
Ken
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thank you so much for the sweet thoughts you left.
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Wonderful poem. It shows such imagery and emotions that truly touches the soul. Excellent job.
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Michael
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and thank you for the wonderful comments. Its good to see you.
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Excellent mine eyes are going closed so I don't see what you want me to see>>>>>nasty ! lol
This has it all so perfect, flows like a river down to the sea. I love that when rain drops drip from heaven I can see it as if it were in my ktchen dripping away to a slow melody .Word coun t is great and honestly very nice and good luck in the contest. mel
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Mel
Thank you dear friend
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as my wife and i were waking up this morning to a soft rain outside we both smiled. the tenderness of such mornings is wonderful.
your lines here capture that sense well. nice writing.
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Rick
i was looking at a group to join and the title of the group is "there's something sexy about the rain" One never knows where inspiration will come from.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful note.
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