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Love Me


I need someone to help me,
Fill this empty space.
Someone to care and listen,
Help me win this race.

My heart is beating,
I don't know for how long.
Is there someone there,
To show me I was wrong?

My screams and cries for you,
don't reach past my mind.
Would someone stop to listen?
Love me, and be mine?

I need someone who loves me.
Someone I know that cares.
Will any of you love me?
With you my life I'll share.

I long to be with someone.
Who loves me as I am.
No one I need to change for,
Someone who knows I can.

How long must I wait for you?
I know you need me too.
Do you see my empty tears?
Forever must I wait for you?

I take each step with caution,
Hoping you are near.
Yet as each day closes,
I grow closer to my fear.

I sense my darkness growing,
As silent as the moon.
My life won't last forever.
Will someone love me soon?

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  • AlexInWonderland
    November 16
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    I'll love you. Now and forever. <3

    Great poem, btw. It flows...and it's sweet. Idk why...but it gives me a sweet taste. Like a caramel....no...something more sugary.....ummm.......idk. And at the same time, it's a little bitter....oh! A toffee? No! Dark chocolate! .....something like that, but with more sugar. Wow...I'm getting weird. It feels like I'm rambling. Do you think I'm rambling? I think I am...

    Ummm....my point: You're not gonna die alone. you're gonna die with yer cat. lol jk. Ily. <3