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wintrayana











dear winston,


how long will you wait for someone who
won't show up?

when even the echo of your voice
is unreturned


love,
namita









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  • chilali
    September 21
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    i love this


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 20

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    i like it when poetry asks really good questions to its reader. wonderful poetry.

    i can't believe you still like this winston guy. you're so young Nami. don't waste your precious youth on this one guy who will never show. [i would tell Shelby this]


  • KytKitsune
    September 20
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    Ooooh. Short, sweet, to the point. Very nice!
    Keep on Writing the good Write!
    Kyt the Kitsune