blinded by blindness
man lost the apple of his eye
offer to lust
bureaucrat
doing desktop loving
360 degree view
"Betere is appel y-yeue than y-ete"
I should have shown caution
with the Big Apple
Macintosh
please forgive me:
I'm merely Eve
and blond
Author notes
Stiletto's are good weapons, did you know? I posted this as a comment earlier today.
In a list
A contest entry
- Staccato n' Stiletto's by Ken-Maverick.
400 points, ended September 21, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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JUDGED!!
...is it the shoe that is the weapon or the one who's wearing them?
I really like your take on this prompt, very unique and unexpected.
Well done poet. All the best in the contest.
Ken
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better the apple you give than you get...everytime...you may be Eve and blonde, but nothings "mere"...Good luck in the contest...Dan
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glad i wasn't the only person who read stiletto and think dagger instead of heels
haha..love it...the ending cracked me up..very nice poet ..clever best wishes 
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