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The Dark Knight


The Dark Knight




A day as cold as a winters night.

A day as hot as a summers storm.

The rain is pouring i hear silence.

Droplets pound the ground like a heavenly stamepede.

A fantasy of love dancing about in the field of dreams.

I rush to a butterfly and it spreads its wings.

Takes flight as glitter sparkle in the sun.

A fantasy land to never be reached.

A fallen comrade to never be turned away.

I howl into the night it's an eerie winter night.

No light can be seen.

A horizon gleaming like snow.

Ashes befall the earth and an incenerated being appears.

A knight with a black horse breathing flames.

The knight weilding the sword of evils bane.

Strikes down the darkness and brings light.

Peace and tranquility the land is saved.

The knight of honor braved.

He rides off into the sunset and is never seen again.

Till the day the darkness grows he slumbers in the field of dreams.

Till evil comes back The Dark Knight shall be watching over us.

Ready to defend the innocent.

Weilding the sword of evils bane.

The Dark Knight shall never be slain.

Author notes

idk wrote it out of nothing while replying to a message on AP i wrote it inside the reply lol

hope you enjoy it tried somewhat on it.

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  • AkitoTae
    October 5

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    Wonderful imagry and good flow.
    It was a very good read, a very fabulous write.

    A fantasy of love dancing about in the field of dreams

    Wonderful line! Good job!


  • glitterydoom
    September 20

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    i agree with the comment below.
    this was amazing
    i loved it.


  • Nymphetemine
    September 20

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    Oh my god this is fabulous.... I love the story and the analogy... Its sooo cool..

    Droplets pound the ground like a heavenly stamepede.

    Oh I love this line...
    Wonderful imagary. Great poem...