lovebug!

no need to confer
my heart has spoken;
no need to infer
or minds will be broken -

this illness I lovingly dote
breathes only your name,
and this bug's antidote
is when you do the same!

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Short and sweet by TheCSIgurl. 900 points, ended October 6, 34 entries
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TheCSIgurl
September 21

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Awww! This brings one great big smile to my face! Two even!

I just love it - short and sweet. *sighs happy sighs*

Plus, the pic is really cute!

PorcelainHope
September 20

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I was gonna say "short and sweet" then I saw it was the title of contest, hehe,, but it is indeed.

And that little girl in the pic is really cute.

Good luck in the contest kabayan.

right now

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