Let your lips unfurl as the gentle petals of a rose
Kissed by the suns Holy light..
Let my lips touch with such gentleness
Your sacred bough..
And as lips touch lips
A hairs breath apart
Tasting of fresh dew
Sweet kiss that lingers an age and a time
Let me taste of that fragrance which lingers upon the breeze .
Your sacred perfume...
Author notes
credit to the contest host...
Hope this is what you are looking for.. Wrote this for someone special...
A contest entry
- Short and sweet by Tuesdays-child.
900 points, ended October 6, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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lovely
beautiful, it has a pausing and reflective quality..just like a slight breath.
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this has a nice rythemn to it it is slow and gentle
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Beautiful! Very heartfelt and lovely...ah to kiss one that you love or long for is an incrdible experience! This is very romantic! I love it! Good luck in the contest.
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Nice vivid images here! Plus, I especially like the "fresh dew" part. Lovely! My only critique: both "suns" and "hairs" are meant to be possessive.
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