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(Together)

wandering about in a maze
destiny is clearly unknown
yet they say
"the sky is the limit"

so I jumped over the wall
trying to find my way through
a very stupid thing to do
for now I am limping
and still remained stuck


until I noticed you


I stood in shock

and noticed a key in your hand
I ran straight in your arms
together we leaped
and touched the stars

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 20

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    this is so very poetic!! love it!
    Kari, you have penned a lovely piece
    here. i am so grateful you came by,
    because i was so pleasantly pleased
    with this write.

    with love and blessings

    Rend