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Saturday music


  all the hours of my day
used to be yours
to use with abandon and play

did you say you wanted an adventure?

today I saw the sun
locked it out on the porch
and went back to restless dreams

Saturday night awoke me
I tore at the calendar
spent the night watching people dance
  my legs involuntarily moving
to your beat
  until they were silenced
with heavy doses of
  part - alcohol
  part - old age

I saw a young couple kiss
  the music whispering sweet lies
of love and eternity and glowing future
into their vulnerable souls


The music wants its audience
  to keep dancing

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  • crivanea silver member
    September 20

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    what a poem..beautiful imagery in this one..and i step to the beat of that music..very nice write here poet ..interesting how you write part age/part alcohol