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Falling

The earth keeps on walking over this tragic soul,
I can’t see inside this body anymore,
The hurt follows every step I make as if I’m destined to loose,
Wish somebody could sweep down to save me and wipe these tears,
Praying at night to put this soul to ease,
But it just seems that everywhere I go, the pain seems to grow,
Never seem to catch the idea,
The fault is my own for it is my pain,
Blood flows down my scars and I feel the memories,
My heart is destined to bleed,
I won’t stop till it’s complete,
Till this hearts all bled out…

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Written April 6th, 2004

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  • Diane Wehi
    April 6, 2004
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    I FELT A LOT OF FEELING PUT INTO THIS WRITING. I CAN RELATE TO IT IN MY OWN WAY AS I'M SURE A LOT OF OTHERS WILL ALSO. WELL DONE.LOVED IT KEEP IT UP.THANK YOU.