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Un-funny Bunny

There once was a little brown bunny,
Who thought himself really quite funny,
He laughed at his jokes,
But annoyed other folks,
Therefore never making much money!

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  • Autumn Ginger
    November 29
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    awesome limerick! the rhyme flowed smoothly, and the part about considering himself funny but really only annoying others is cool!


  • WonderfulDreamz
    October 9
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    Sweet!

    Short but still really awesome! : ) That is very cute! <3 I Love it! keep writing..


  • no more name
    September 21
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    LOL... Sounds like alot of the comodians out there now. Thanks for sharing this poem.


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    September 20

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    Morning Izzey, nice to see you writing again and this is so cute.
    Keep it going honey...Love Aunty Lu x