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Razor Sharp Claws

Razor sharp claws rip through my body as I try to crawl away.
White hot pain sears through my body blinding me for an instant.
Suddenly I am grabbed from off the ground and thrown hard against a nearby wall.
I cry out as something sharp cuts deep into my back.
I push up off the ground.
It takes a second for me to regain my balance and sight.
Looking around,
I see the creature that has attacked me.
Its twice the size of an elephant and looks almost like a dragon.
Its standing there huffing,
Ready to attack again.
Running forward,
I dodge the attack,
And duck behind the wall.
But no sooner than my foot hits the ground,
I am grabbed by one of the beast's claws and carried away.

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  • Leanna-bean
    September 20

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    This is a very intense fantasy poem! And the poem goes with the title so well! Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and good luck to you!


    • PainedLoner
      September 20
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      You are most welcome and thank you for allowing me to enter your poem.