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Electric Velvet





a touch


and the shivers run up
from my fingertips to my lips
urging me to kiss

I brush
velvet skin
silken hair
warm coolness
wet desire
and I tingle

you still thrill me
still enchant me
still awaken
my thirst
for more


always


more



always
you

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  • Twisted Fairy
    January 31
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    When a man is upset, his soul is a Lion's Den, but when he feels he is exactly where he desires most to be, his soul is that of a weightless bird. What a wonderful feeling. Thank you for sharing that experience.


    • dericlee
      January 31
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      When a man is exactly where he wants to be, and that place (or the woman who IS that place) is somehow threatened, the agony can be damn near lethal.

      I wanted badly to show her with this work that despite the changes to her body, nothing has changed between us. I think it may have helped, at lest a bit...at least for a while. So much of a woman's self-image is tied to her body...which I think is mostly the fault of men...

      ...anymore, ya don't have to wonder what happened to "love" as a concept absent physical attraction, you really have to wonder that there is any room left for it at all, and that...that's heartbreaking!


  • Serenem
    January 19

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    sweeet

    the love you have for her always warms my heart... so true and deep, eric. This is more than beautiful, just like your love.

    Mel


    • dericlee
      January 31
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      I'm sorry, Mel...the day you left this comment was the day of my last stroke, and I never saw it until today when I got the notice of Simon's comment. Since you know from way back, this means even more to me...


      I sent that email, by the way.


  • ToBSavvy
    September 23, 2009

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    sensual and sensational. love is grand and it looks like you've been there and will be there for a lifetime. beautifully erotic in wonderfully subtle tones. glad to read your poetry mr. eric. i am touched.


  • Cynewulf
    September 21, 2009
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    This says so much with so little. Very Imagist bordering on the Zen! Very good.


  • heinzs silver member
    September 20, 2009
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    True love's passion

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