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Electric Velvet





a touch


and the shivers run up
from my fingertips to my lips
urging me to kiss

I brush
velvet skin
silken hair
warm coolness
wet desire
and I tingle

you still thrill me
still enchant me
still awaken
my thirst
for more


always


more



always
you

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  • ToBSavvy
    September 23

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    sensual and sensational. love is grand and it looks like you've been there and will be there for a lifetime. beautifully erotic in wonderfully subtle tones. glad to read your poetry mr. eric. i am touched.


  • Cynewulf
    September 21
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    This says so much with so little. Very Imagist bordering on the Zen! Very good.


  • heinzs silver member
    September 20
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    True love's passion