a touch
and the shivers run up
from my fingertips to my lips
urging me to kiss
I brush
velvet skin
silken hair
warm coolness
wet desire
and I tingle
you still thrill me
still enchant me
still awaken
my thirst
for more
always
more
always
you
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When a man is upset, his soul is a Lion's Den, but when he feels he is exactly where he desires most to be, his soul is that of a weightless bird. What a wonderful feeling. Thank you for sharing that experience.
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When a man is exactly where he wants to be, and that place (or the woman who IS that place) is somehow threatened, the agony can be damn near lethal.
I wanted badly to show her with this work that despite the changes to her body, nothing has changed between us. I think it may have helped, at lest a bit...at least for a while. So much of a woman's self-image is tied to her body...which I think is mostly the fault of men...
...anymore, ya don't have to wonder what happened to "love" as a concept absent physical attraction, you really have to wonder that there is any room left for it at all, and that...that's heartbreaking!
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sweeet
the love you have for her always warms my heart... so true and deep, eric. This is more than beautiful, just like your love.
Mel
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I'm sorry, Mel...the day you left this comment was the day of my last stroke, and I never saw it until today when I got the notice of Simon's comment. Since you know from way back, this means even more to me...
I sent that email, by the way.
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sensual and sensational. love is grand and it looks like you've been there and will be there for a lifetime. beautifully erotic in wonderfully subtle tones. glad to read your poetry mr. eric. i am touched.
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This says so much with so little. Very Imagist bordering on the Zen! Very good.
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True love's passion
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