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Trouble

How much trouble can a ninety pound girl be?
How much will it cost-
My peace of mind
My career, all my assets
to find the way through the web
Found her broken
Snatched her from the mind spiders
For a chance to hold her close
A chance at Serenity
Way to travel, to unravel the lies inside
Her precious head

The way they used her
Her beauty weaponized; her grace striking face

I will find a way
To cast away
Her dance of death

I still see my sister
I still believe in her
The goodness of her heart
How she hates
The price they will pay
To get her back
The things she does
When they press the buttons
Only they know how to press
They took Christmas away
Two by two, hands of blue

Hates what she has done
The things she catches in the web
Of her dreams
Things no one should have to deal with
I'm only trying to run
Trying to run from Trouble
Flee to the Stars
To the ragged margins
Nothing special
The thing any Brother would do

How much trouble can a ninety pound girl be?

Author notes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwGHQ6WyQFU
Trouble; Coldplay

Episode: Ariel

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  • LisaRowe silver member
    October 5
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    fabulous, excellent use of simon and river. very touching.


  • Cold Blue Eyes
    September 22
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    Nice Write

    I really like how you framed the poem with the same line. It helped the poem come around full circle.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 22

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    Oh, you captured the angst,
    the hurt, the desperate attempts
    to hold it all together for her,
    the ninety pound girl.

    I played the music and read again.
    Yes, trouble, but not too much
    for the caring person who speaks
    in this piece.

    Well done!!!!!!!

    M-C


    • deercatcher
      September 22
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      Thank you. Did you see any of the series? Its called Firefly. You can watch the episode on Hulu. Takes about 44 minutes. The series only lasted one season. The girl who plays the actress was a ballerina.


      • Aesthete2000 gold member
        September 22
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        No, I didn't but I will give it a shot.
        Was at Hulu tonight because of a
        non-working TV!

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