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night time sky

i dont like looking up at the nightime sky,
im afraid of what i may find

because you never know what lies between the stars
and just how far away and soon it could come

god always leaves the little twinkles in the darkness
a little light to see where we are, until the sun comes up

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  • humblpye gold member
    September 22

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    I guess that everything is there for a good enough reason hey Ali...hmm, I often wondered what those lil' twinkly stars were doin up there...! I guess I'll have to be a bit more careful in future when I look at them, just in case they know what I'm a-thinkin!
    Ya, you never know huh?
    Thanks for reminding me!
    John


  • she still smiles x gold member
    September 19

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    Wow.

    Ali, this was beautiful

    Your images are stunning and I love the references to the night time sky. The second two lines were my favorites, though. I always wonder what's up there in that great big blue sky.

    I love your writing :].

    ♥