Have you ever
watched your veins beat?
Just brush your finger tips
over that pale blue line,
as it goes up and down.
The exact line that is keeping you alive.
It seems so frantic,
Just so paniced;
as it goes up and down.
Feel the heartbeat,
Touch the pulse.
Its's so simple,
isn't it?
Yes, that simple pale blue line,
that's keeping you alive.
No wonder it's so distraught.
It's so scared.
This vein, this very vein
is just so scared.
As this tired vien goes up,
and stays down.
That pale blue line,
that held on tight.
That pale blue line,
that kept her alive.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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really good
i liked this a lot
it flows very nicely
its quite amazing
The only thing is you spelt vein wrong
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