Falling
into the rabbit hole
is the best of all.
Before, there was standing;
Now, there is motion.
There's color, in the dark,
Many colors!
I'm not sure if my eyes are open or not.
Falling
is suspense;
I'm suspended-
no ropes, nope.
No ties.
Just falling,
not knowing,
is the thrill.
A contest entry
- Short and sweet by TheCSIgurl.
900 points, ended October 6, 34 entries
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Comments
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Neat! This makes me think of Alice in Wonderland! Great write
Before, there was standing;
Now, there is motion.
These are my favourite lines! I love 'em.
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Thanks! I haven't written in a long time and I'm glad I haven't gone completely rubbish :]
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