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for a month

for a month i thought
maybe my heart would rest
with you

for a month i thought
of you of we in a best
view

i would lie to say
you were my true love
i ever and only once
felt biterness of love
and softness of a glance
but not with you

but
for a month i thought
my heart would finally rest
i was like a bird searching for a nest

but i was captured in the trap
and i woke with deception like a slap

for a month i said i loved you
i was sincere i was real
for a month i said i missed you
it was true so true

but i lied to say i never loved before
the way i loved you i was hiding the evidence ,
that i can't be with him and i am with you..

i now realised so after you left me
and deceived me
i was ready to be just with you , and convince myself
i lied to you i said i loved you
now i realised
i loved just to be cared

and now you recall
after you break my wings
and you think you could corect your falt
but what you don't know is that
i maybe loved you truly
but not as a best one love
and  am not blinded to forgive.

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  • EyeRaven
    1 day ago
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    but silly it is not

    I suggest you get over your laziness, because this has feeling to it,
    it has consistence and it has emotion

    the rest is up to you

    one suggestion is don't use the "I" word too much
    I used to use it carelessly, but it only showed what an egomanic creature I am

    good day


  • lake of dremas
    September 19
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    oops too lazy


  • lake of dremas
    September 19
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    silly poem , full of mistakes but i am to lazy to correct them !
    just writing my thoughts