for a month i thought
maybe my heart would rest
with you
for a month i thought
of you of we in a best
view
i would lie to say
you were my true love
i ever and only once
felt biterness of love
and softness of a glance
but not with you
but
for a month i thought
my heart would finally rest
i was like a bird searching for a nest
but i was captured in the trap
and i woke with deception like a slap
for a month i said i loved you
i was sincere i was real
for a month i said i missed you
it was true so true
but i lied to say i never loved before
the way i loved you i was hiding the evidence ,
that i can't be with him and i am with you..
i now realised so after you left me
and deceived me
i was ready to be just with you , and convince myself
i lied to you i said i loved you
now i realised
i loved just to be cared
and now you recall
after you break my wings
and you think you could corect your falt
but what you don't know is that
i maybe loved you truly
but not as a best one love
and am not blinded to forgive.
Comments
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but silly it is not
I suggest you get over your laziness, because this has feeling to it,
it has consistence and it has emotion
the rest is up to you
one suggestion is don't use the "I" word too much
I used to use it carelessly, but it only showed what an egomanic creature I am
good day -
oops too lazy
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silly poem , full of mistakes but i am to lazy to correct them !
just writing my thoughts




