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burn

my face scarred from the flames
your soul it licked my pain
hands of angels they rub away my past
once upon a time I lived but now I am dead
my essence cut away from me
replace the taste with diesel
gasoline it fuels my desire
squash your fate with the glove

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  • esroddo silver member
    September 25
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    Wow so dark and painful write

    Your write is intense and intriguing thank you for entering and good luck LISA