Ambrosia ambrosia is that you?
There was a crisp cool breeze
That mingled in the trees
The leaves danced with a shimmer
They filled my heart and made it simmer
Ambrosia ambrosia come and play with me
Put a smile upon my face and fill my mind with sanity
Whisper soft light whimsical tunes of pleasure
Then I'll know I have found a treasure
My inner soul will reflect joy that you can not measure
Ambrosia ambrosia you're an illusion I can see
You changed my life, I'm happy as can be
A wonder that can fill my life with harmony
Is this what you mean to me
Ambrosia ambrosia are you really there ?
Author notes
Hum, What is it that we look for to fill that small bit that we need to fulfill ?
But don't look now......... what about that real need that we all seem to have to fill.
Where dose it come in to play?
A contest entry
- Your Best Prewrite That No One Notices by usually-untitled.
680 points, ended October 5, 31 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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the repetition is so sweet! ambrosia ambrosia...
the nature imagery in the first stanza is wonderful. you've really captured that breeze.
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i see someone is improving over here....well done Bev! i love the tone of your voice and your opening lines pulled me right into the poem...i love this! guess who is joining the site now, i've talked Lesley into it, although, she wants to write a novel, but i think this will help her.
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Hi Tara, I love the new pic. Thanks for the comment. I had talked to her about the site some time ago and she said she would like to join. I hope that she dose that would be great. Do you know when our BOSS gets back? I hope I have a few days this week with out them. LOL Bet every one has been very relaxed the past week. Hope to see you soon.
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