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Lies Alone

Tell me now
Tell me its over
It seems at least
You'd get that right
The last few days
Came on like winter
Cold and harsh
Where all just dies
somethings changed
something within you
I can see it
See it in your eyes
No i don't want to talk it over
I don't want to hear your lies
You told me love
You said forever
I dont want to hear your lies
All has changed
togethers nothing
I've never felt so
so alone

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 20

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    Ah..well..there are many faces of the life..and the loneliness is the one face..but it is not necessary that like other faces this will not change...lol..this may change again..and you may be together once again..

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