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The Branch Falls



A Song, I sing
to thee
I whisper to he


the branch falls

a new gaze
throughout
the days


I hear the whisper

he is brazen
for the gold
is gone

Autumn
is near,
I saw it

in the full
moon

red
full, complete
big red


growth
is about
to dissapear.


now the season
is done



Seasons Changing

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 19

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    yes it is that time of year again and I liked this approach of yours

    I hear the whisper

    he is brazen
    for the gold
    is gone

    Autumn
    is near,
    I saw it

    in the full
    moon

    i liked this esp