I deserve to die
a neddle through the eye
because I made you fall apart
I get a bullet in the heart
and when I'm gone no need to fear
not a single person will shed a tear
I don't deserve a life
so stab me with a knife
I've ruined yours so just end mine
you'll do the world a favor, your reason devine
so end my life here and now
I know why just not how
end me before I hurt another
trap them in my web
"I will never hurt you"
a promise I should have kept
now I've destroyed a frien
so I'm begging you please give me my end
don't try to help me just let me die
so I never get the chance to see that mansion in the sky
What did you think
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Wow I feel like this alot of time I just want to give up yet I fight and Idk why anymore
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s Searra
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wow this is just wow. This is sad Everyone makes mistakes, all you can do is move on and learn from your mistakes you had. I like the ending of this poem though. Anyways, nice write and ya got a friend in me
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Wow.
I had no idea you were capable of expressing emotion lol the untouchable, unreachable John. Now you've gone and proved my theory false. I admire the pain in the words. Somehow, I can relate. I sort of like it even...wow.
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good one!!!
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If you die, ill follow -_-
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it is very beautiful and touching but you don't deserve to die there are ppl in this world that don't want you to die
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beautiful and very touching
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