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I'm Sorry

I know how many times I've said it
so many times the words have lost their touch
I know that I have hurt you
I want to make the pain go away
but I know it's there as a reminder
of the ways I've hurt you to this very day
I never meant to hurt you
I feel so bad I want to cry
I have betrayed and made you angry
you want to stab me through the eye
and I deserve it
I deserve all the anger that you feel
now every time I see you
my spine get's a chill
I'm not asking for forgiviness
I don't deserve another chance
because of what I've done to you
eternal hell shall be my dance
I just want you to know
that I hate what I've become
all the damage I've done to you
it can never be undone
I only have one thing to ask of you
before the setting of the sun
don't let your life be ruined
because of what I've done

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  • KillingWithASmile
    February 7
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    I can relate to this verrryyy much.
    good work


  • Fallen-Thumper gold member
    October 25, 2009
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    Moving

    this piece is really moving and holds alot of emotion, i really like it and it says a lot, an amazing piece; great job!
    -penguin-


  • MelissaluvzSheila gold member
    October 5, 2009

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    This was a very well written enjoyable piece... I found this really moving.
    Anyways. This was good. Very moving.. Keep up on the awsome work.


  • lil angel
    September 26, 2009

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    this peom is meaningful you can really tell the author is trying to get the point across. it ryhems well. the title is emphesised in the poem.


  • Vampyre Lord Onyx
    September 21, 2009
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    I'm sorry was written for Jaimie


  • Creed Trees
    September 20, 2009
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    awww. Who are all these poems about John?

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