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How Strong

I suffered from loneliness. I didn't have your life. I didn't have a dad that kissed me good-night. I didn't have a dad that made of laugh. All I had was a victimous mom. I had no one, but a pen and a book. A place where I wrote what no one would look. And it was pain all that it took. I had a lonely childhood. I couldn't relate to no other child cuz they were all wild. I was forced to grow faster than I should. A 15 year old with the mind of a 30 year old. And still no one would understand my words, because I lived in my own little world. If only I could, I promise you I would not turn back the hands of time. Though all this has made of realize that I was meant to live this life and all this was a test to see how strong this girl really is!

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  • daprincess93
    September 23
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    Big strong words. Hope you not hurting no more.