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Death be upon us, Part Two

It's as frigid as the Himalayans Mountains
Permafrost is created with every touch
His presence is around though not seen
And it is antagonized by the vitality of life.
Every illness brings him great euphoria
And each day you wake bring him agitation
It's a vampire that feeds on vigor and vim!!!
It awaits the day when you battle no more
It knows that you can't fight forever
So its wait patiently......So its waits...

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  • esroddo silver member
    November 1

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    Wonderful write well enjoyed

    I like the words you used an how you expressed them. These are my favorite lines;
    "And it is antagonized by the vitality of life.
    Every illness brings him great euphoria
    And each day you wake bring him agitation
    It's a vampire that feeds on vigor and vim!!!"
    Love you Your Ap Mom Lisa huggs


  • z etoile
    October 24
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    wow! great write thanks for sharing